Sunday, January 11, 2009

Rhyming to hate you

I hate the way you look at me,
i hate the way you talk;
I hate the way you hold my hand,
while walking up the rocks;

I hate the way you make me smile,
i hate the way you sigh;
I hate the tears in your eyes'
while bidding me goodbye;

I hate the gifts u give to me,
i hate the way u lie;
I hate the way you pamper me,
when on ur lap i cry;

I hate the way am hating you'
i hate the time gone by;
I hate the promise you made to me,
"together we live and die"...;

8 comments:

PI said...

interesting. keep writing :)

Enigma said...

thank you...yup need sum inspiration.

Ankesh said...

dude but
i love the way write
i luv the way you talk
i luv the way u smile
i luv the way u flirt
i luv the way u fight
be d way u are
n be the dear one of mine....


keep writing..darun likhechis...

Enigma said...

thank you ankeshda........ya hope to write many more

Anonymous said...

tui bal cher r ati bandh...thou ur writing is simply awesum bt the subjct u choose to write simply sucks.......nyway oi meyetar naam r phne nos de....

Enigma said...

dont use uncensored words in my blog.....its 4 literate people only. ;p

Rakhee Samanta said...

khub bhalo...tor modhye je ei talentao ache jantam na to? likhe ja....

Lazy Flying Saucer said...

hey nic write up....
luved d words n its essence....

randomnly landed on ur post

Pratyush
http://uncensoredrajstory.blogspot.com